“May our miracles
…Not be cruel.”
I tipped my head up,
Away from my novel.
So uncharacteristic
From some televangelistic
Noise at the end of Pop’s assisted-living room.
The old & Southern bible guy
Was odd about numbers, too.
Not magic mathematics about chapters & verse,
But worse, what words add up to,
& seven is this
& five is that.
His numbers were different from mine.
Maybe, I was getting it wrong.
The old & Southern crowd was all nodding.
It takes a stadium.
Maybe ‘m
Imaginin’,
Tho’ mostly sure that’s it.
Very nice. I like your use of relationship, connotation, and melody in this piece. Nice! ~Blessings
Comment by Marissa — February 27, 2012 @ 7:18 pm
You found me. I’m finding you back. And now, I’m intrigued, villain…I want to know more about you…not finding it here. Tell!
Comment by lynnbiederstadt — February 29, 2012 @ 3:14 pm
I’m following you, and rooting for you in yr transitioning/ Keep on
Comment by namelessneed — May 25, 2012 @ 2:15 pm