Honestly, I'm a Liar, & Other Balances & Imbalances

May 20, 2011


I  contend

I can maintain  mainly steady motion,

As a  seastorm wreck  under ocean.

I’ll  extend

My hand humanely.  Mainly obligation.

I must offer up, against the grain,

To dare offer  heart,

That light  from a slat

In a self-styled safe cell that

Will spill and splash

On  still quite a quiet crash scene again.


  1. I like the use of two different rhythms and the imagery. The last lines are really good!

    Comment by seabell — June 2, 2011 @ 10:59 am

  2. Enjoyed reading your work.

    Comment by meiro — June 7, 2011 @ 7:09 am

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